Note that this post is under improvement, right now I don't have enough time to complete it so I publish it and will complete it progressively.
These notes are for me:
[Normalize the meeting]
[Make things slower, more descriptions]
[Soften the story]
- Hey.
- ... hey!
- Nice to meet you, my name is Torna, I'm 17 and I'm a Faleno as you see. What about you?
- Um, well, my name is Kalron, and um, I'm 17 too, I'm a Monte as you see ...
- Nice, would you mind if I light a cigarette and blow a stream of smoke into your mouth?
- Wow, are you kidding me? would I mind? I'd love to, you know how Montes love to be blew a stream of smoke into their mouth.
- Really? I'd love to do so, ... so ... what are we waiting for? [lighting a cigarette]
- You're such a good Faleno, it's said that Falenoes usually don't serve such services, but ...
- People who said that are just stupid, I love to do so [smoking the cigarette and blowing the smoke into the Karlon's mouth]
- wow ... wait ... yeeeeess ... ummmmm ... ahhhhhhh ... yeah ... wait ... wow ... give me more ... more ... ummm
- Do you like it? good, seems that you like it.
- Yeah.
- Well, Karlon! would you mind if I ask you to lift me up?
- WHAT?
- I said please lift me up. [smiling]
- Come on, my back would get broken!
- Well, but it means so much to me, um, [whispering:] actually I need it.
- What the fuck? you're telling me that you need to be lifted? well let me tell you something, it's a sick need, and you're a needy Faleno.
- Sick need? seems that you forgot, I smoked a cigarette which is absolutely harmful to my lungs just to please you, now what? lifting me up would break your back?
- I'm busy, I've works to do right now, I should go. [leaving the scene.]
- Wait [following Karlon] I would smoke a pipe and blow a stream of smoke into your nose? ha?
- Really? will you do that?
- Only if you lift me up [smiling]
- Well, um, [lifting Torna up] just tell me how high would you like to be?
- Uuhhhh, come on, your back's gonna get broken ... ahhhhh ... ummmm
- Are you kidding me? My back never breaks. It's made of iron.
- Wow ... higher ... higher ... ummmmm ... ahhhhh ... yeaaaah ... that's right ... lift me higher ... thank you, thank you very much, that was GREAT.
- Now would you smoke that pipe?
- Of course, and then would you lift me up again?
- Of course, but then you should smoke a cigar.
- No problem if you lift me up higher.
- And then you smoke two cigarettes.
- And then you keep me on your arms for 10 minutes.
... tick ... tack ... tick ... tack ... 6 months passed ...
to be continued...
These notes are for me:
[Normalize the meeting]
[Make things slower, more descriptions]
[Soften the story]
- Hey.
- ... hey!
- Nice to meet you, my name is Torna, I'm 17 and I'm a Faleno as you see. What about you?
- Um, well, my name is Kalron, and um, I'm 17 too, I'm a Monte as you see ...
- Nice, would you mind if I light a cigarette and blow a stream of smoke into your mouth?
- Wow, are you kidding me? would I mind? I'd love to, you know how Montes love to be blew a stream of smoke into their mouth.
- Really? I'd love to do so, ... so ... what are we waiting for? [lighting a cigarette]
- You're such a good Faleno, it's said that Falenoes usually don't serve such services, but ...
- People who said that are just stupid, I love to do so [smoking the cigarette and blowing the smoke into the Karlon's mouth]
- wow ... wait ... yeeeeess ... ummmmm ... ahhhhhhh ... yeah ... wait ... wow ... give me more ... more ... ummm
- Do you like it? good, seems that you like it.
- Yeah.
- Well, Karlon! would you mind if I ask you to lift me up?
- WHAT?
- I said please lift me up. [smiling]
- Come on, my back would get broken!
- Well, but it means so much to me, um, [whispering:] actually I need it.
- What the fuck? you're telling me that you need to be lifted? well let me tell you something, it's a sick need, and you're a needy Faleno.
- Sick need? seems that you forgot, I smoked a cigarette which is absolutely harmful to my lungs just to please you, now what? lifting me up would break your back?
- I'm busy, I've works to do right now, I should go. [leaving the scene.]
- Wait [following Karlon] I would smoke a pipe and blow a stream of smoke into your nose? ha?
- Really? will you do that?
- Only if you lift me up [smiling]
- Well, um, [lifting Torna up] just tell me how high would you like to be?
- Uuhhhh, come on, your back's gonna get broken ... ahhhhh ... ummmm
- Are you kidding me? My back never breaks. It's made of iron.
- Wow ... higher ... higher ... ummmmm ... ahhhhh ... yeaaaah ... that's right ... lift me higher ... thank you, thank you very much, that was GREAT.
- Now would you smoke that pipe?
- Of course, and then would you lift me up again?
- Of course, but then you should smoke a cigar.
- No problem if you lift me up higher.
- And then you smoke two cigarettes.
- And then you keep me on your arms for 10 minutes.
... tick ... tack ... tick ... tack ... 6 months passed ...
to be continued...
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